Anzahl der Beiträge : 319 Anmeldedatum : 16.10.12 Alter : 27 Ort : Am Rande des Wahnsinns O.O
Thema: Cloudfire telll you something Do 22 Nov 2012 - 5:42
Mal etwas anderes o: Meine Geschichten waren ja immer Deutsch und selbst erfunden, an dieser Geschichte ist nur ein kleiner Teil frie erfunden und einiges aus dem Bch genommen o: Nya und die andere besonderheit, sie ist auf Englisch ;) Bin voll Englisch Fasziniert seit ich WaCa auch auf Englisch besitze ^-^ Naja Hauptsituation ist diese:
Spoiler:
Cloudtail(Wolkenschweif) died because of a RiverClan Warrior. Now his son Cloudfire (Wolkenfeuer) is a Warrior and tell Lionpaw (Löwenpfote) something about old times, he heard from his mother Brightheart (Lichtherz)
Die Geschichte wird nicht weiter fortgesetzt ist also eine kurze o: Also eigentlich ist es nur ein Gespräch o.ô Nya ist nicht die beste, ist in Geschichte entstanden xD
Spoiler:
„Hello young warrior“ „Morning Cloudfire…um but I’m not a warrior…“ „Of course, but in 3 or 4 moons you are.“ „But I never will be such a great warrior like Firestar…How did he became a warrior? Who was his mentor?“ „Thats a very long story!“ „Please tell me!“ „Okay…A long time ago Firestar was a kittypet, called Rusty. He life near the Twolegplace together with Smudge, another kittypet. Every day Rusty sit in his graden and watch the forest. One day he go in the wods and try to catch his first mouse.“ „And he get it, Right?“ „No…because of the bell on his collar. It ring and the mouse run away. In this moment Graypaw attaked him, he thought it was a warrior from another Clan. Rusty fights very well for a kittypet and when they stoped fighting he asked Graypaw about the free live in the forest. Graypaw telled him something and then Bluestar and Lionheart came.“ „Bluestar and Lionheart?“ „Bluestar was the leader of ThunderClan before Firestar and Lionheart was her deputy after Oakheart. After a long talk with Rusty, Bluestar invite him to a free life in the ThunderClan an Rusty agree. They took him to camp.“ „And then??“ „Then Bluestar announce the newcommer. She telled about his home, the Twolegplace. In this moment Longtail barbed Rusty and his origin. Rusty become angry and attaked Longtail.“ „And he win? It’s an easy battle, Longtail can see anithing because he is blind.“ „No…to this time Longtail was a strong warrior with well eyes. He was a warrior since 2 moons. But Rusty defeats him yet. He was an unormal kittypat. In this battle Longtail destroyed Rusty’s collar. Bluestar think it’s a sign from StarClan. Then she renamed him in Firepaw, because of his red fur. But how he look like isn’t the only reason of his name.“ „Whats the other?“ „A prophecy mean: Fire only can save the Clan. And Bluestar thougt Rusty is that Fire.“ „And he saved the Clan really? Before what? „He saved him before Tigerclaw. Tigerclaw was a great warrior…but he took the wrong way, the bad way. Redtail, Lionheart, Brindleface, Whitestorm and Shiftpaw died because of him“ „That are a lot warriors…but Tigerclaw is dead, right?“ „Yes, Scourge kill him.“ „Scourge?“ „The leader of BloodClan. Tigerclaw bring them to the forest…but they won’t do this what Tigerclaw wants.“ „And then they kill him? That was easy, was it?“ „No, when the BloodClan came in the woods Tigerclaw was leader of ShadowClan…his name was Tigerstar…“ „And he had 9 lives? Then it was a long battle, right?“ „No…Scourge killed him with one blow. He took all of Tigerstars life at once. „ „And then the BloodClan leave the forest?“ „No! The BloodClan want to take all of the forest and the greatest battle begins. In this battle my father dies…Cloutail was agreat warrior like Firestar. He mean anytime I will be the greatest warrior of all… but I didn’t think so.“ „But you are a great warrior Cloudfire!“ „Thanks Lionpaw…“ „But when I am a warrior, I will be the best!“
